Monday, November 30, 2009

SCHOOLIN

Working on a poster for my Intro Graphic Design class and received no critique from my professor on this. Have a fake company with a fake event i needed a fancy poster for...

Any critique would be greatly appreciated!!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Cool. A little factoid, i worked on some of the actual signages for the Burj back in 2006.

from Vig.

Jeremy Hughes said...

whoa! that's pretty cool Vig. what did you do for the signage? also you working on anything cool lately? any good drawings?

cate said...

Pretty cool stuff! Did you ever get any feedback? Well, here's my unsolicited 2cents for what it's worth... Rolex logo could come down in size a bit. "A building by..." can't seem to decide if it wants to be the same width as the the party specs or be smaller. Also, tracking seems a bit odd since the rest of the poster has really wide tracking- maybe make it all the same? Slash at end of the party specs seems a little awkward, but I see why you went that route. If the overall size is 11x17 or larger, you could easily take those two lines down to one line and still have it be easily legible. Overall very eye-catching with the orange. It reminds me of a book I have... Good luck!
Cate